Practice Writing 5 Paragraph Essays On Sport

By Emily Levy, founder & director of EBL Coaching

Do you find that your child has interesting, smart, and creative ideas but struggles to put them down on paper? Many students are unsure how to begin the writing process, how to write well-organized thesis statements, and how to structure each of their body paragraphs. As the writing demands of school increase, these struggles tend to follow. Yet learning the steps for composing a well-written five paragraph essay can help all students improve their writing.

Here’s how it’s done:

Step 1: The introduction paragraph. This paragraph tends to be the most challenging one for students to write. At the start of the essay, the student must lure in the reader with an interesting, thought-provoking remark or anecdote. The paragraph must end with a well-constructed thesis statement to set the organization and tone of the essay. Here are some guidelines for writing a strong introduction paragraph:

1. The opener. Students can choose one of the following five ways to start the essay:

  • Question (Ex. Have you ever wondered how lasagna is made?)
  • General Statement. (Ex. Growing trees is an easy process.)
  • Quotation. (Ex. A wise man once said, “If it ‘aint broke, don’t fix it.”)
  • Opposite Statement (Ex. Many people believe that all water is safe to drink.)
  • Story (Ex. The manager left his store to take a quick lunch break. He was sure all of his employees were trustworthy. He was gone for one hour, and when he returned, all of the cash was missing from his register.)
  • For practice, encourage your child to write just the opener of several different essays on various topics. These five choices will add variety and creativity to his or her writing!

2. The thesis statement. The thesis statement should always come at the end of the introduction paragraph. It should contain two parts: the student’s opinion on the topic and his or her plan for the essay. For example, a well-constructed thesis statement might be as follows: Blue Man Grill is the best restaurant in town because of its food, atmosphere, and friendly staff. Note that for this thesis statement, the opinion is Blue ManGrill is the best restaurant in town and the plan is because of its food, atmosphere, and friendly staff. Thus, the first body paragraph of this essay would be about Blue Man Grill’s food, the second body paragraph would be about its atmosphere, and the third would be about its friendly staff. For practice, have your child write thesis statements on the following topics: winter sports, junk food, and holidays.

3. The lead-in. The lead-in is composed of 3-5 sentences and should come before the thesis statement and after the opener. We teach the lead-in after teaching the thesis statement, however, because it flows together and is easier to grasp this way. As practice, students should read well-written introduction paragraphs and highlight the opener in one color, the lead-in in another color, and the thesis statement in a third color.

Step 2: The three body paragraphs. The thesis statement sets the plan for the content of each body paragraph. When writing the body paragraph, students should ask themselves: If the thesis statement is: Skiing is a great sport because it is fun, social, and athletic, what would each body paragraph be about? In this case, the first body paragraph would be about why skiing is fun, the second would be about why it is social, and the third would describe why it is an athletic sport.

Each body paragraph should include details, examples, statistics, quotations, and any other specific information. The old adage “Show, don’t tell” certainly applies here. It is important that the student describes information in detail, with concrete backup from credible sources, rather than just “telling” about it. Remember that if any information is taken from other sources, it must be credited as an outside source.

Step 3: The Conclusion Paragraph. This paragraph can be a tough one for many students to write. Students must reiterate all of the information from the essay without being redundant, and add more information without really adding more information. How is this done: The solution for writing the conclusion paragraph is as follows:

  1. Restate the thesis statement. This is where the student should remind the reader of his or her opinion on the topic and restate the three supporting points. For example, for our Rocking Horse Grill essay, we might start our conclusion paragraph with the following: “Because of its delicious Mexican cuisine, convivial ambiance, and energetic staff, Rocking Horse Grill is one of the best restaurants in Chicago.”
     
  2. Lead-out. The next 2-4 sentences should lead the reader to the author’s final, conclusive remark. The student can reiterate some points about each of the body paragraphs. These sentences should, of course, contain words that are different from those used in the actual body paragraphs.
     
  3. Concluding Remark. This remark should be conclusive, strong, and perhaps profound. It should leave the reader thinking. For example, a concluding remark for our Rocking Horse Grill essay might be: “The next time you are in town, do not bother with any other restaurants since Rocking Horse Grill has it all.”

If your child follows the above model when writing, he or she will be well on the way toward a perfect five paragraph essay. But first, to your child, a few other pointers:

  1. Try not to directly state your opinion. Avoid phrases like:
    • “In this essay, I will talk about…”
    • “I think that smoking is bad for you because” (rather, simply state “Smoking is bad for you because…”)
    • “In conclusion, my essay proves…”
  2. Remember to use transition words when transitioning between paragraphs and between points within paragraphs. For example, at the start of your first body paragraph, you might write, “The first reason why Rocking Horse Grill is the best restaurant in town is because it offers delicious Mexican cuisine.” Between points within that paragraph, you might write, “Next, the burritos at Rocking Horse are some of the best I have ever had. They are warm, thick, and are filled with fresh ingredients. Furthermore, there is a wide variety to choose from.” The words in italics are some transition words you might use.
     
  3. Perhaps the most important advice you should follow is to always use three steps when writing: brainstorm, write, and self-check. Use the following guidelines when doing so:
    • Brainstorm. Use a visual diagram, a word processor, or even a hand-written list to plan your essay. Make sure you write out your opener, your thesis statement, your three points for your body paragraph, and some details, quotes, statistics, or other specific information that you might include in each body paragraph before writing. This step sets the stage for the organization and flow of your essay.
    • Write. Use the above-mentioned guidelines for specific information on how to write the essay itself.
    • Self-check. This step is critical; one that many students neglect! When self-checking your work, do not rely solely on the spell check or grammar check on your word processor. Many mistakes are missed by using just these tools! Instead, self-check your work using the following checklist:
      • Capitalization: re-read your essay and make sure that all letters that should be capitalized are, and those that should not be capitalized are not.
      • Tense: re-read your essay and make sure that all tense is consistent. That means that you should not mix past and present tense together. Rather, you should choose one of the two and stick with it throughout the essay.
      • Organization: re-read your essay and ask yourself the following questions: Does my essay have a strong opener? Is that opener followed by a lead-in, and then by a well-constructed thesis statement? Have I clearly stated my points in each body paragraph? Have I restated my thesis statement in my conclusion paragraph and ended my essay with a thought-provoking remark? If so, then check off this box.
      • Punctuation: again, re-read your essay and make sure all of your punctuation is correct.
      • Spelling: re-read the essay and make sure all spelling is correct.


Note that the key theme here is re-read. You should re-read your essay five times, each time checking for a different element.

Encouraging your child to follow this step-by-step guide to writing a five paragraph essay can help him structure his thoughts on paper in a well-organized, logically flowing fashion. It may take some time, but the more practice, the more progress you will see – so help him get to work!

Dr. Emily Levy is the Founder and Director of EBL Coaching, which offers one-on-one tutoring and intensive summer programs. For more information, visit www.eblcoaching.com or call 212-249-0147.

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A Sample Five-Paragraph Theme

Outline

The Benefits of Regular Exercise*
[*This sample essay was written for the use of our students by Bette Latta, a professor in the English  Department at the former State Technical Institute at Memphis, and is reproduced here with her permission. The added notes are mine.]

Thesis Statement: Regular exercise releases tension, improves appearance, and increases stamina.

Sentence Outline:

I.   One benefit is the release of tension.
      A. An overaccumulation of adrenaline produces tension.
      B. Exercise or active participation in sports releases tension.

II.  Another benefit is an improved appearance.
      A. The figure becomes more firm and trim.
      B. Clothes look better.
      C. Skin may become clearer.

III. Still another benefit is increased stamina.
      A. Better muscle tone and strength improve performance.
      B. One may be better able to ward off illness.

Please note: This outline omits the introduction and conclusion paragraphs. Since the outline's primary purpose is to identify main ideas and support, omitting the introduction and conclusion makes sense. The main idea of the introduction is already expressed in the thesis statement, and its support emerges from all of the body paragraphs. Similarly, the main idea of the conclusion is a reinforcement of the thesis, and its real support also lies in the body paragraphs. Nevertheless, you should not approach the writing of your introduction and conclusion paragraphs casually. You need to recognize their special purposes, and choose the methods that will best suit your purposes in a particular essay.


Text

The Benefits of Regular Exercise

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     In recent years many people have become increasingly aware of the need for physical fitness .*  Almost everywhere people turn, whether it is to a newsstand, television or billboard , * advice for guarding and improving health bombards them.  Although much of this advice is commercially motivated by those eager to sell vitamins, natural foods and reducing gimmicks ,*  some of it, especially that advocating a regular exercise program, merits serious attention. Such a program, if it consists of at least thirty minutes three times a week and if a person's physician approves it,*   provides numerous benefits. Regular exercise releases tension, improves appearance, and increases stamina .*

*The introduction begins with a broad view of physical fitness generally, but also engages the reader by connecting with general experience
*Notice that the writer reaches past the general "anywhere one looks" to the more specific and concrete "newsstand, television or billboard."
*Again notice the specifics�not just "to sell products" or "to sell stuff." The specifics make the idea more convincing, and create more associations for the reader.
*Notice how the introduction is a good place to present background, definitions and limitations that affect the thesis and topic generally.
*By placing the thesis at the end of the introduction, the writer not only makes the main point clear and emphatic, but also makes sure that the essay�s main point is uppermost in the reader�s mind as the reader begins the body of the essay.

     The first of these benefits, the release of tension, is immediate .*  Tension builds in the body because of an overaccumulation of adrenaline produced by stress, anxiety, or fear. * Doctors agree that performing calisthenics or participating in an active sport such as tennis or volleyball for thirty minutes releases tension. If a person swims, jogs or rides a bicycle for half that time, he or she should sleep better at night and have a better temperament the next day. In addition, after the release of tension, petty irritations and frustrations should be less troubling. * For example, an employee upset by the day's work and by traffic congestion may rush home, argue with the family, and eat excessively. Taking about thirty minutes to release frustrations through physical exercise could help him or her to avoid this behavior. Planned physical exercise, therefore, can eliminate, or at least control, tension.*

*This sentence offers the � idea (release of tension), renews the essay idea (these benefits), and also alerts the reader to the underlying logic of the arrangement of main ideas ("is immediate" suggests to the reader that the essay will follow a chronological order, the order in which the benefits become available).

*Again, notice the specifics in the next two sentences�specific activities and specific benefits.

 

*Note again how the general term, "petty irritations and frustrations," is followed by specific examples. Whether you use the exact words or not, "for example" is a helpful concept to employ.

 


*This closing sentence reinforces both the � idea and the essay idea.

     An improved appearance, which is a second benefit of regular exercise, * is not as immediately apparent *as a better disposition .*   Exercise takes perhaps a month or longer to show its results in a trimmer, firmer figure. Improvement, however, will come. A person who is ten pounds overweight, for instance, may be able during this time to burn away most excess fat and to tighten muscles, thereby reshaping the physique. Having improved muscle tone and even posture, he or she will wear clothes more attractively and comfortably. Combined with a sensible diet, an exercise program will also improve a person's skin tone. This improved appearance will provide confidence and favorably impress others.

*See how the � opens with both the new � idea and a renewal of the essay idea. There�s no way the reader can get lost here.

*"Not as immediate" reinforces the underlying chronological order of the main ideas.

*"Better disposition" points back at the preceding �.

 

 

 

 

 

     In addition to the self-confidence engendered by an improved appearance, increased physical strength produces stamina.*  A stronger, healthier body is obviously more capable of working harder and , in fact, of withstanding normal fatigue then a tense, weak one. A worker who exercises should be able to complete a forty-hour week and still retain enough energy for mowing the grass, painting the garage, or cleaning windows .*  Similarly, the student who goes to school, keeps house and perhaps works part time should accomplish tasks efficiently. Equally important, this stamina helps to ward off illnesses such as colds and influenza. Altogether, improved endurance is one of the most important benefits of a regular exercise program.

*Note the transition, pointing back to the preceding � and ahead to the new � idea.

 

 

 

 

*I know this is frivolous of me, but I would rather have the extra energy for enjoying a hike or bicycle ride. I�m not sure I perceive more energy for yard work as a real plus!

 

 

     Although easy solutions to the goals of losing weight and achieving an attractive, energetic body saturate the media ,* actually acquiring these benefits is not easy. The rewards, however, are fully worth the effort of an established exercise program that makes a person feel relaxed, look healthy, and have adequate strength for strenuous as well as routine activities . *

*This is an example of the "circle close." The conclusion returns to the opening, repeating the initial example, question, problem or statement that opens the essay. This provides a satisfying sense of overall design and completeness, and strengthens unity. This is not the only approach to an effective conclusion, and sometimes it seems artificial or forced, but it�s often smooth, effective, and easy. Be sure to note how it works here by rereading the introduction to see how it is repeated here.

*Note how clearly the essay idea and the main supporting points are reinforced through their restatement here. The overall pattern of the essay follows old advice for effective public speaking: "Tell 'em what you�re gonna tell 'em; tell 'em; then tell 'em what you told 'em." In a short essay, this approach can sometimes seem like overkill�but there�s little risk of your readers being confused..

go back to the description of  five-paragraph themes in "Thesis Statements, Outlines, and Five-Paragraph Themes"

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